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PostSubject: POKER   Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:51 pm

POKER


A high stake gamble
win or die
played by countless
poker faced, I

Grab the chance
this fortune dont come twice
cut my wings
sell it for a price

the people stare
Sweat covered cards, I hold
I ripped the 7 of diamonds
meaningful soul, broken ten-fold

a final sip from a glass of ice cold beer
breathe in,breathe out
gamble raised to the extreme
flowing money, flowing sin, persisting doubt

an airconditioned room full of people
mixed stench,mixed emotions
looking back with closed eyes
living half alive aided by illusions

ten of hearts to ace of hearts
a royal flush to wing the game
cut the head of the king of hearts
let the queen have all the fame

all in!the bet was called
lay down your life!the people roared
I threw the cards and grabbed the knife
crimson red blood, painted the floor

The people say bleed!bleed!
must maintain the poker-faced mask I wear
pretend the slice dont hurt, gamble thy dear life
Tick~Tock
I would die,atleast I took the dare
I say bleed!bleed!blee~
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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:48 pm

Okay.

I would die, atleats i took the dare..to read this lengthy poem.
I say (too) bleed bleed! Nose bleed.

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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:05 pm

Julio,

While i was reading this one...
i felt like in a real poker game...
it feels so real..
great allusions too... like your usage motif red..
you know..

crimson red blood
king of hearts
queen of hearts
the repetition of bleed and blood.

it could also be about, a love gone extremely wrong, so lives perish...

alluded heavily on a poker game ^_^

nice poem...
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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:21 pm

^

WAW. nagkakaintindihan kaiu dalawa ha. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:06 pm

it runs with the blood..
so, bleed, bleed..
im finishing something interesting marai, for you... ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:55 pm

thank you jackofalltrades.
just make sure na maiintindihan ko yan ha. HAHA
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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Fri Apr 24, 2009 1:43 am

weee...tnx..glad you like the poem...this poem runs way deep...even I dont understand the emotions running in it...oh wel...
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PostSubject: Re: POKER   Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:48 pm

nice one... Smile

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